The article I'm doing my blog post on is about the tablet
war. It's just the company's competing to get the top selling tablet.
This article came from Tech Crunch. The name of the article
is "Apple Tops J.D. Power’s Tablet Survey, Barely Beating Amazon; Tablets
Top Smartphones For Usage".
The article is mainly about how J.D. Power's survey says the
Kindle Fire tablet is running a close second behind Apple's iPad. They were
only separated by six points. The Final scores for the brands were Apple: 848,
Amazon: 842, out of 1,000. They both scored higher than the average.
This impacts the world, when people buy a new tablet for the label and not really the quality. Also it effects the company's making these tablet because they are rolling in the cash; for something just because it has a picture on it. Or a label, which like I've probably said a lot is ridiculous.
1) Hunter I really liked the information you decided to use in this article. The information you put I completely agree with how you stand on this topic.
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You need to hyperlink the website or she will take half the points from your grade.You need one more section for the last part of your post.
3) Androids should be capitalized in the fourth chunk. that was all I'm really sure about so great job, way better than the last time, great improvement.
Great article Hunter, I really enjoyed reading it! I also agree on how ridiculous it is that people buy expensive tablets just because of the label on it. As much as I loved reading your article, I have some suggestions. My suggestion is that you should change your font on the top half. It is hard to tell periods from commas. I would also like to make a few corrections. In the fourth section of your blog you wrote by, when it should be buy. And the article source should be hyperlinked. A few of your sentences are also run-on sentences. Either than that your article was great.
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